I went to New York!
Hi everyone.
Actually, I went to NYC last week!
I had a so much fun time!!
I watched musical, Billy Eliot. This is very good musical.
And I met friend since 20years! This is so much amazing thing!
We talked a lot of things.
She is American, she lived in Tokyo about 20years ago. We were often play together.
I want to live in NYC someday!
But I can't speak English well. I have to learn more!
添削をお願いします！
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You have to Improve your English more.....Nicole.
But Good post...Keep Posting..k
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I went to New York!
Hi everyone.
Actually, I went to NYC last week!
I had a so much fun time!! (or: I had a very fun time!!)
I watched a musical, Billy Eliot. This It is (or: was) a very good musical.
And, I met a friend since for the first time in 20 years!
This is It was so much really/very amazing thing!
We talked about a lot of things.
She is American, but she lived in Tokyo about 20 years ago. We were often played together.
I want to live in NYC someday!
But I can't speak English well. I have to learn more!
添削をお願いします！
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