The Happy Day !
Today very tired but happy,because my brother's son was born today.There is a baby will call me aunty from the day ! I'm so happy!I feel very magica lwhen a small life appeared in front of me.I hope my brother's baby will grow up healthy and happy!!!
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The Happy Day !
Today much tired but happy, because my brother's son was born today. There is a baby who will call me aunty some day! I'm so happy! I feel very excited, when a small life appeared in front of me. I hope my brother's baby will grow up healthy and happily!!!
Congratulation AUNTY
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thank you dear!
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The Happy Day!
Today I am very tired but happy. My brother's son has been born today. I can't believe, that there is a baby who will call me aunty from now on! I'm so happy! I have felt so delighted when the small life has appeared in my presence. I hope, my brother's baby will grow up healthy and happy!!!
NB! Use Present Perfect, it will refer your essay to the present moment. You still feel excited about the baby, don't you? Wish your family all the best! :)
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Congratulations, auntie! :)
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