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26th November A normal day that likes usual,nothing special nothing uncommon. Howver,I felt really good today,forgot all the things for a while,got temporarily rid of the reality and enjoyed a complete Saturday which I have lost for a long time. Getting up early,just in order to enjoy the peace which only can be found in morning,which has nearly been forgotten. When I went to the balcony to breathe the fresh air in the early morning,I noticed that my white rose finally got blossom.Though the flower is so small,it is still the most special flower to me. I bought this rose in last year,at that time it was just a sprout.Told that it only needs sveral months can the rose bloom,I was full of hope that I can get a beatiful rose before long.However,reality always against people's will.When we eagarly want to get something or do something,usually,we only recieve disappoiting.Because our exception always too high and too perfect,which is hard to fullfill. For the later days,I didn't have the hope that this rose can bloom.I just let it be,whatever it likes.To my surprise,it come into flower and it is really beautiful.Then I know,in our life,a great number of things cannot be controled by us and we cannot hand everything tightly. Life is unpredictable because we don't know waht will happen in the next second.And it's also the reason why life is so appealing.

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26th November

It was a normal day that likes like usual, nothing special, nothing uncommon.
However, I felt really good today, forgot forgetting all the things everything for a while,got temporarily rid of the reality, and enjoyed enjoying a complete Saturday, which I have had lost for a long time.

Getting up early, just in order to enjoy the peace which that only can be found in the morning, which has had nearly been forgotten.
When I went to the balcony to breathe the fresh air in of the early morning, I noticed that my white rose had finally got blossom bloomed. Though the flower isso small, it is still the most special flower to me.
I bought this rose in last year. At that time it was just a sprout bud. Told that it only needs needed several months can the rose to bloom, I was full of hope that I can could get a beautiful rose before long. However, reality always works against people's will. When we eagarly eagerly want to get possess something or to do something, usually, we only recieve receive disappoiting disappointment, because our exception expectations, always too high and too perfect, which is are hard to fullfill fulfill.
ForIn the later days after my purchase, I didn't have the any hope that this rose can would bloom. I just let it be, whatever it likes liked. To my surprise, it come into flowered, and it is really beautiful. Then I know knew, in our life lives, a great number of things cannot be controlled by us, and we cannot hand handle everything tightly closely.

Life is unpredictable because we don't know waht what will happen in the next second. And it's also the reason why life is so appealing.

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nice one. everyone live life on the basis of hope. No hope, no life. Thanks
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You are prettier than your rose ^^
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wow that is so beautiful.

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