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A story happened before dawn It was 01:00 in the morning,i am sleeping with my sweet dreams.But because of my very Strong vigilance i waked up by some kind of rustle. you know in this moment any of a little sound can scare you,don't you? oh, my god, What the hell was that?The first evil thing came out of my mind is: mouse?? Then i jumped out of my bed opened the light and started to search the spot where the scary sounds came out. Finally, in the left corner of my wood bed, i found a big huge giant mouse.Can you believe it?He's staring at me just like i did.Y-ee-l......起了一身的鸡皮疙瘩.Okay,you son of ***ruined my dream. My room is about 16 sqm just has one door and one window and usally i closed them before i go to bed. So,haha,,,he can't get out of here unless he kills me which only happened in US movie...okay,then i garbed a bag which is the only thing around me that i can use and i fold it into half again and again until i can hold it in my palm and it can keep me from being bited by mouse. After about 20 minutes, i pushed him into the wall corner and pressed him under the bag with my fastest speed. And he keeps screaming for like 10 seconds and finally he's dead with his mouth and eyes opened.Y-ee-l...Y-ee-l... Even though it is small compared with human being or other animal, but it is really fast and strong. I saw it could jumped 1 meter high with its tiny feet.Anyway, it really freaked me out and ruined my dreams. Satan bless you, you little devil~~~

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A story happened before dawn

It was 01:00 in the morning,i am  was sleeping with my sweet dreams.But because of my very Strong vigilance i waked up by some kind of rustle. you know in  at this moment any of a little sound can scare you,don't you  doean't it?

oh, my god, What the hell was that?The first evil thing came out of my mind is was ---mouse?? Then i jumped out of my bed opened turn on the light and started to search the spot from where the scary sounds came out.

Finally, in at the left corner of my wood wooden bed, i found a big huge giant   ???(big is ok) mouse.Can you believe it?He's staring at me just like as i did.Y-ee-l......起了一身的鸡皮疙瘩(got goose bumps).Okay,you son of ***ruined my dream. My room is about 16 sqm and just has one a single door and one window and usally usually i closed close them before i go to bed.

So,haha,,,he can't get getting out of here was impossible for him unless he kills me, which but it only happens in US movies...okay,then i garbed picked up a bag which is was the only thing around me that i can could use . and i fold it into half again and again until i can could hold it in my palm and so that it can could keep me from being bited by mouse.

After about 20 minutes, i pushed  impended him into the wall corner and pressed him under the bag with at my fastest speed. And he keeps kept screaming for like about 10 seconds and finally he's dead killed with his mouth and eyes opened.Y-ee-l...Y-ee-l...

Even though it he is small compared with human being or other animals, but it he is really fast and strong????. I saw it could jumped 1 meter high height with its his tiny feet.Anyway, it he really freaked me out and ruined my dreams.

Satan bless you, you little devil~~~

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