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A Memorable Trip

Last summer, I took a trip to VungTau sea the beach at Vung Tau with my family. Before the day of departure we've had prepared all thing everything for this trip, such as : swimsuits, drinking water, fruits, etc. before started day. That night I was so excited that I couldn't sleept sleep, and only looking forward to the new next day started.

We entered VungTau seaside the beach at Vung Tau at 8 o’clock. In front of my eyes was a coloured blue sea. We couldn't stay and wait to for our parents looking to find a place to sit. We Hurry hurriedly to changed into our swimsuits and jumped in to into the blue water. We played in the water very interesting with great interest. this was the first time I never had so much fun in my life I felt so fun. After about thirty minutes, we were hungry and went back to the beach to have some food. We ate the delicious fried rice before eating consuming the seafood and fruit which that were odered by our parents had ordered. After our meal, we jumped into the blue sea again. We took many a lot of pictures, picked up many shells have with strange shapes, etc. We didn’t went go back to the beach until the sun made had turned our skin become brown .


We left VungTau sea the beach at Vung Tau with many linger regret. Our parents promised to take them bring us to the beach again. We were happy on hearing that. We are now looking forward to the next trip.