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about me
I'm an outgoing girl and i like making friends. So there is always happiness around me. I also want to make friends with you. I have lots of friends and they all like me. On this weekend, my friends and i will go shopping, play后应该接具体运动名称 and go travelling~ we will(将来时) have a nice(比happy更恰当) time(不可数名词).
I like listening to the music and traveling. I just traveled several cities because of the empty pocket.I wish someday i can go abroad to broaden(比wide恰当 ) my horizon.I really hope so. Actually i have learned English for many years but i still don't know to how to speak like a native. Maybe because i am not a native. I know i have to study more ,such as the culture, education , especially native-spearkers' theirs(指代不明)thinking patterns.I really hope someday i can speak English like a native.so if you have some good ideas , please tell me , thanks so much. of course , i have made some foreign friends and they are very kind to me, i really thank to them.
Thanks Thank my dear friends.
Well done! Insist on what you are doing now. You'll make it some day.
about me
I'm an outgoing girl and i like making friends. Therefore there are is always happiness around me. I also want to make friends with you I would like to be friends with you. I have lots of friends and they all like me. During On the weekends, my friends and i will go shopping, play or travelling~ we have spent shared so much many happy times.
I like listening to the music and traveling. I just traveled to several cities because of the poor porket(?) .I wish someday i can go abroad to widen my horizons. I really hope so.
Actually i have learned English for many years but i still don't know how to speak like a native. Maybe because i am not a native. I know i have to study more ,such as the culture, education , especially their thinking pattern.I really hope someday i can speak english like a native.so if you have some good ideas , please tell me , thanks so much. of cause i have made some foreign friends and they are very kind to me, i am really thankful to them.
Thanks my dear friends.
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