First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to teach English in my country.  I also want to realize my dreams of becoming a musician. I like to communicate with people and to sing because it puts people in a good mood. That is why I study English on my own.  I would be glad to speak with native speakers of English.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I learn English because I want to become a teacher of English language in my country or it is precisely what I need to realise my dreams of music profession. I like to communicate with people and i like to sing, do good mood to people ... And cause of it I study English language independently Also I will be glad to dialogue with native speakers of English.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to become a teacher of English language in my country; in other words, it is precisely what I need to realise my dreams of a music career. I like to communicating with people and I like to sing, and put people in a do good mood to people. So because of this, I study English language independently. Also I will also be glad to have a dialogue with native speakers of English.

Hope that helps a little - I didn't want to rewrite over what you had written. :)