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My Childhood (I was born in 1972 in Hardin in mainland China.) Childhood is silvery, childhood is golden, childhood is colourful,childhood is...etc. In everyone's heart, there are many beautiful memories of our childhood. I had no book, no TV, no computer, no toy, no ball, etc, when I was a child in mainland China. At the time, I heard the world from only one radio because China was very poor and have not opened the door of nation. But the black ground was mine, the blue sky was mine, the little pool was mine, the clear river was mine. Listen, the wind, the birds, and the frogs, etc are singing a nice song. Wonderful! Did you hear? I am seeming to hear it. The sounds always follow me with my growing . In summer, sometimes my friends and I caught the butterflies, the dragonflies and the mantises, ect. And we talked to them. Sometimes we went to the little pool and jumped into it. We felt cool, relaxed and interesting. (all of us were naked) In winter, our favorite the little pool iced over. That was great! The parents made the selds for us. We played it on the little pool . After it snowed, we were the artists and the soldiers. We made some big snowmen and fought with snow. Have you done it? Rolling on the snowfield was the happiest thing for me.(the happiest thing was who rolled on the snow field for us.) In fall , we were thieves. What did we steal? We went to the farmland, picked up some corns and dig up some potatoes, when the farm did not be there. We found out some woods, lighted them and began to roast them. How delicious! We were lucky. The farmer has never caught us. When someone went to home. The parents looked angry because we were very dirty. Someone would not have supper or dinner. Oh ,someone was I. My parent told me that who did it was a bad people. I seemed to understand it. In spring, I might wear new clothes, set off firecrackers and have nice foods in the spring festival . We loved it very much. There is the most important reason was that we could have some meat in the festival. We have not got meat in the other day. Although we can have it everyday,today, but they are not more delicious than which I ate in those years. Childhood. Although we were very poor at the time, our lives were still colourful. It left me the lots of nicest memories in my life. When I was writing this note, I was seeming to go back to my childhood.

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perfect,come on lxf!
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I see many similarities with my own childhood growing up poor on a farm in Kentucky here in America. You brought back many memories.(wonderful ones) Thank you!!
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Delightful essay. It made me remember my childhood. A nostalgic smile smile in this foggy day.
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我的童年 (我出生在1972年,中国大陆的哈尔滨市) 童年是银色的,童年是金色的,童年是五颜六色的,童年是。。。。。。 在每个人心中都会有许多童年美好的记忆。我还是个小小孩时, 我没有书。没有电视,没有电脑,没有玩具,没有球等等,那时,只有一台收音机陪伴着我并让我听到了世界的声音。因为中国那时太穷和没有开放国门。可是,黑土地属于我,蓝天属于我,小池塘属于我,清澈的小河属于我。 听,风儿,鸟儿,还有青蛙们等正在唱一首美妙的歌。太美妙了!你听见了吗?我好像听见了。这声音一直伴随我成长。 在夏天,我和我的小伙伴们有时候抓蝴蝶,蜻蜓,螳螂等,并跟它们说话。有时候我们来到小池塘,跳进里面,感觉凉爽、轻松和有趣。(我可都是光着) 在冬天,我们最喜欢的小池塘结冻了。太好了!爸爸妈妈为我们作小爬犁。我在池塘上滑爬犁玩。下雪后,我们就是艺术家和军人了。我们会堆出许多大雪人还打雪仗玩。你玩过吗?在雪地上打滚是最快乐的事.(最快乐的事是在雪地上打滚) 在秋天,我们变成小偷了。我们偷什么?当农民不在田里的时候,掰些苞米,挖些土豆。找来木头,点着后,烤玉米和土豆。太香了。我们比较幸运,农民从来没有抓到我们。当某个人回到家,因为实在太脏了,爸爸妈妈都很生气,某个人就会没有晚饭了。oh!某个人就是我呀.父母告诉我,做那种事,就成了坏人了。我好像明白了。 春天,春节里可以穿新衣服、放鞭炮和吃好吃的。我们都非常喜欢这个节日。有一个最主要的原因就是在这个节日里可以吃到肉。平时是吃不到肉的。虽然今天我们可以每天都吃肉,可是现在的肉没有我们那些年吃的肉香。 童年,虽然那时我们很穷,但是我们的生活却是丰富多彩。童年给我留下了我生命中许多最美好的回忆。当在写这篇小作文时,仿佛又回到了童年。
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My Childhood

(I was born in 1972 in Hardin in mainland China.)
Childhood is silvery, childhood is golden, childhood is colourful,childhood is...etc.
In everyone's heart, there are many beautiful memories of our childhood. I had no book, no TV, no computer, no toy, no ball, etc, when I was a child in mainland China. At the time, I heard the world from only one radio because China was very poor and have had not opened the door of to other nations. But However, the black ground was mine, the blue sky was mine, the little pool was mine, the clear river was mine.
Listen, the wind, the birds, and the frogs, etc are singing a nice song. Wonderful! Did you hear? I am seeming to hear it. The sounds always follow me with my growing .
In summer, sometimes my friends and I caught the butterflies, the dragonflies and the mantises, ect. And we talked to them. Sometimes we went to the little pool and jumped into it. We felt cool, relaxed and interesting. (all of us were naked)
In winter, our favorite the little pool iced over. That was great! The parents made the selds for us. We played it on the little pool . After it snowed, we were the artists and the soldiers. We made some big snowmen and fought with snow. Have you done it? Rolling on the snowfield was the happiest thing for me.(the happiest thing was who rolled on the snow field for us.)
In fall , we were thieves. What did we steal? We went to the farmland, picked up some corns and dig up some potatoes, when the farm did was not be there. We found out some woods, lighted them and began to roast them. How delicious! We were lucky. The farmer has never caught us. When someone everyone went to home,the parents looked angry because we were very dirty. Someone would not have supper or dinner. Oh ,someone was I. My parent told me that who did it was a bad people. I seemed to understand it.
In spring, I might wear new clothes, set off firecrackers and have nice foods in the spring festival . We loved it very much. There is the most important reason was that we could have some meat in the festival. We have not got meat in the other day. Although we can have it everyday,today, but they are not more delicious than which I ate in those years.
Childhood. Although we were very poor at the time, our lives were still colourful. It left me the lots of nicest memories in my life. When I was writing this note, I was seeming to go back to my childhood.

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