When I am in the water
I used to be a professional swimmer. Back then I was not able to enjoy swimming at all. It becomes totally different after I was "retired". I go swimming only for fun now. When I am in the water, I feel like I am floating on a huge chunk of jello. I like to float on my back thinking how tiny I am in the pool, how tiny the pool is in the city..how the earth is just a dot. I like to see the shadow of my arms on the tiles or imagine I am a torpedo. I love the broken sunlight through the water. I don't even mind the feeling when water gets into your nose which my friend described as brain-burning. Although I do mind drink it. My dream is to swim in a mirror-like lake deep in the woods and a cabin with fireplace waiting on the bank.
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Correct this entry? Wow, I could find one mistake with the pronouns and that was all. Did you write this? It's pretty much flawless. It's a wonderful story! I am the same in water, by the way. My Skype: brian.madden4
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