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so boring now... Today is sunday ,free day today ,when i click in italk.com . I see some new friends added me ,it make me so excited,but no one online now. i just want to talk with them,and tell them my feeling. I open a MSN,but no friends there,if U see my topic ,add me,if you want...and tonight , i have a dancing show ..hope it will success... have a good day!!!

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I'm so bored now... (remember: boring and bored have different meanings)

Today is Sunday, and it's a free day today. When I click in visited italki.com, I see noticed some new friends added me. It make me so excited, but no one is online now. I just want to talk with them, and tell them my share what I'm feeling.
I open an MSN account, but have no friends there. If U you see my topic, add me, if you want...and Tonight, I have a dancing show. I hope it I will succeed... Have a good day!!!

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So boring now...

Today is Sunday, a free day today!

When i click on italki.com, I see that some new friends added me. It makes me so excited [happy?] but no one is online [right] now. I just want to talk with them and tell them how I feel.

I opened MSN but no friends there.

if you see my postings, add me if you want.

And tonight, I have a dancing show ..I hope it will be a  success.

Have a good day!!

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