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I'm so bored now... (remember: boring and bored have different meanings)
Today is Sunday, and it's a free day today. When I click in visited italki.com, I see noticed some new friends added me. It make me so excited, but no one is online now. I just want to talk with them, and tell them my share what I'm feeling.
I open an MSN account, but have no friends there. If U you see my topic, add me, if you want...and Tonight, I have a dancing show. I hope it I will succeed... Have a good day!!!
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You also have a good day!
So boring now...
Today is Sunday, a free day today!
When i click on italki.com, I see that some new friends added me. It makes me so excited [happy?] but no one is online [right] now. I just want to talk with them and tell them how I feel.
I opened MSN but no friends there.
if you see my postings, add me if you want.
And tonight, I have a dancing show ..I hope it will be a success.
Have a good day!!
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