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The sun is bright today! But I woke up so late, (remember to put a common and not a period because it is not the end of a sentence). until mom tell told me that a have there will be a visitor. Earlier, I played the cellphone game, named is "pub girl". This game rules, is make prescribed money when entertainment visitor later.(I don't understand what you are tying to say here?) I think this is so funny. I'm already 19 years old, but I still like this game like when I'm since I was an elementary school student. How can I do? Is this good or bad?

Good job! Just keep practicing! :D

~Robear

Is this good or bad?

Good sunshine today! → It was very sunny today OR The sun was bright today! ☼

But I woke up so late.until mom tell me have visitor will come. → I didn't wake up until my mom told me that there would be a visiter arriving soon.

Before then, I play the cellphone game,name is "pub girl".Game rules is make prescribed money when entertainment visitor later.  →  Before they came, I played a cellphone game, called  "pub girl". The games rules are to make prescribed money whilst entertaining the visitor. (I'm not exactly sure what you want to say..^^)

I think this so funny.I'm already 19 year old,but still like this game like when I'm elementary school student. →  I think it's so funny. I'm 19 years old, but I still like this game, that I played when I was an elementary school student.

How can I do?This good or bad?  → How did i do? Is this good or bad?

Good, just practice a little more, and you'll get better☻