First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Tsedey Kassaye. I am an Ethiopian girl who needs to study English and to be fluent in English and write perfect letters, reports and so on in the English languge. Please please help me to do so.

(The eho was an obvous typo, and I think there's no need to say English language just English, English people will know what you're talking about and what you mean.  I didn't know what you meant by minutes? But it was all ok and understandable but more work to be fluent =)  .)