My views on online shopping
Developing with the Internet,More and more people can have a chance for shopping on the internet .it can provide a appropriate to people's life, The internet is a good thing ,but it is a bad thing .
Firstly .the internet can supply convenient for people on online shopping , so people can watching TV and shopping at the same time .so much so that people have more time to do other things,For example,traviling. reading book ,taking a walk and so on...........
On the contrary ,the internet also can bring some bad thing to life ,it can make one's life terrible that Account cipher was stolen ,credit probem ....
so,we should take care of it !
In my opinion ,Online shopping include pros and cons ,so we should attach important to Internet!
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
0
My views on online shopping
Developing with the Internet, More and more people can have a chance for shopping on the internet .The internet has been developing rapidly, and more and more people are shopping on the internet.
it can provide a appropriate to people's life, The internet is a good thing ,but it is a bad thing .
The internet can provide many valuable services. However, the internet can also have negative effects.
Firstly .the internet can supply convenient for people on online shopping , so people can watching TV and shopping at the same time .so much so that people have more time to do other things,For example,traviling. reading book ,taking a walk and so on...........
First, the internet is very convenient. People can go shopping online and watch TV so much that they don't have time for other things, like traveling, reading, enjoying nature, and so on.
On the contrary ,the internet also can bring some bad thing to life ,it can make one's life terrible that Account cipher was stolen ,credit probem ....
In addition, the internet has a dangerous side. As people store more important information online, stolen passwords can lead to account theft, credit card problems, and more.
so,we should take care of it !
Therefore, it is important to regulate the internet.
In my opinion ,Online shopping include pros and cons ,so we should attach important to Internet!
In my opinion, online shopping is an important and useful service, that needs more attention.
0
My views on online shopping
Developing with the Internet,More and more people can have a chance for shopping on the internet .it can provide an appropriate to people's life, The internet is a good thing ,but it is a bad thing .Firstly .the internet can supply convenient for people on online shopping , so people can watching TV and shopping at the same time .so much so that people have more time to do other things,For example,traviling. reading book ,taking a walk and so on...........
On the contrary ,the internet also can bring some bad thing to life ,it can make one's life terrible that Account cipher was stolen ,credit probem ....
so,we should take care of it !
In my opinion ,Online shopping include pros and cons ,so we should attach important to Internet!
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
