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Visting to G-STAR I went to Busan(the second city, located at south-east of Korea) with my colleagues for G-STAR. G-STAR is a famous game exhibition and was opened at BEXCO for five days. There was teeming with people when we arrived so, I decided what I see. I choose to see "Lineage Eternal" which is much-talk -about game during G-STAR. It is kind of MMORPG and developed by NC Soft. I waited in a line for about 40 minutes to see it's video. It showed new game skill and some people say it is better than Diablo3. Actually I'm not interested in game ironically, nevertheless I'm working at a gaming company. This visiting is my second. I feel that there are so many people who like games. Privately, I was happy to see the sea and have dilicious food.

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Visting to G-STAR


I went to Busan,(the second city, located atin the south-east side of Korea)
with my colleagues, forto go to G-STAR.
G-STAR is a famous game exhibition and was opened at BEXCO for
five days.
There was teeming with people when we arrived so, I decided
what I seeIt was teeming with people when I arrived. After I got there I decided to look at the I choose to see "Lineage Eternal," which is much-talked 
-about game during G-STAR. It is a kind of MMORPG game andthat was developed by
NC Soft. I waited in a line for about 40 minutes to see it's video.
ItThe video showed new game skills;  and some people say itthis game is better than
Diablo3.
Actually I'm not interested in game ironically, nevertheless
I'm working at a gaming company. I'm actually not that interested in games, even though I work at a gaming company.
This visiting is my second. is my second visit to G-STAR.
I feel that there are so many people who like games.
Privately, I was happy to see the sea and have deilicious food.

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well :) that's reaction of Lineage Eternal (the latest game of NCsoft) in Korea. It's obious that Diablo is a world-famous game.
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I like the game of NCsoft too,but I don't think it is better than Diablo3.

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