my best friend disappeared
Simon is my best friend. but he had disappeared a few days ago.I was worry about him. He likes traveling and sking ,sometimes he's travel a lot. But he didn't lose contact with me whether he was in anywhere.From Nov 3th, I can't contact with him, his phone can't get through, and his QQ and MSN wasn't online, that's incredible!! Im thinking about if he is in trouble or something happend by accident, I hope not.He is inportent for me.
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my best friend disappeared
Simon is my best friend, but he disappeared a few days ago. I am worried about him. He likes traveling and sking, and sometimes he travels a lot, but he doesn't lose contact with me no matter where is is. From Nov 3rd, I can't contact him. I can't get through to his phone, and his QQ and MSN weren't online, which is incredible!! I'm thinking that he is in trouble or something happened by accident, but I hope not. He is important to me.
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thank you everyone!!! I hope I'll find him soon...
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I made a mistake. I should have said, "but he doesn't lose contact with me no matter where he is."
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The story is good and is completely understandable by any English speaker, but I made a few small changes.
I hope you find Simon soon.
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I hope he's fine & will call you soon!! :)
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