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Ffirst day at college One month ago,my nephew came to Shanghai,begining his study in the university.That seemed of great impertance.His dad accompanied him in the journey especially.And in his first day at college,three people help him with the registration affairs.Very quickly he complished all the needs with no difficulties. That reminded me of my first day in the university.No one help me.I had no idea what to do and where to go.I asked others once by once.When finally finishing all things,loneliness attacked me. I think it is not uncommen that college freshmen,peculiarly those who always under their parents' control, feel lonely and helpless on their first day at school. What can be done to reduce such penomena?In my opinion,everone should take their own responsibility. To begin with the parents,they should give their children adequate freedom to be on their own.When the children face a new environment,they have the confidence to deal with it.They won't be full of fear.As for the Children,they should make full prepairetion for the common affairs they might encounter.For instance,they can learn the layout of the school online.Then it will be easier for them to find somewhere and less likely to get lost.Finally,the school shoud also do something helpfull.Many school have the arganisition special for the newcomings.They help the students to be familiar with the new life.They may,as well, encourage the freshmen to recognise that it is a beginning to be responsible for themselves. By these means,the new college students will get used to the new life in the university faster.

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First day at college

One month ago,my nephew came to Shanghai,begining his study in the university.That seemed of great impertance.His dad accompanied him in the journey especially.And in his first day at college,three people help him with the registration affairs.Very quickly he complished all the needs with no difficulties.

That reminded me of my first day in the university.No one help me.I had no idea what to do and where to go.I asked others once by once.When finally finishing all things,loneliness attacked me.

I think it is not uncommen that college freshmen,peculiarly those who always under their parents' control, feel lonely and helpless on their first day at school.

What can be done to reduce such penomena?In my opinion,everone should take their own responsibility.

To begin with the parents,they should give their children adequate freedom to be on their own.When the children face a new environment,they have the confidence to deal with it.They won't be full of fear.As for the Children,they should make full prepairetion for the common affairs they might encounter.For instance,they can learn the layout of the school online.Then it will be easier for them to find somewhere and less likely to get lost.Finally,the school shoud also do something helpfull.Many school have the arganisition special for the newcomings.They help the students to be familiar with the new life.They may,as well, encourage the freshmen to recognise that it is a beginning to be responsible for themselves.

By these means,the new college students will get used to the new life in the university faster.

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