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I have a best friend Kate. We met her at the dance classes when we were 14.
Kate has a nice appearance. She has big eyes, long brown hair, athletic physique. She is very sociable, cheerful, creative, ambitious, friendly.
Kate live her father and mother. She also has a little sister Dasha.
In free time we went for a walk in the park, in cinema, a pizza parlor.We went to dances and still skating in the winter.
I like her for her optimism and positive. When you have a bad mood, she will always be able to amuse you.
We had not seen each other since the beginning of the summer, I really miss her and I hope we will see next year.
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It's very good! Only a couple mistakes, we don't know exactly which dance classes so you met her at dance classes (no "the"), Kate + lives but you and I + live. The big correction is the formatting. Sentences are seldom paragraphs unless you're a Nobel Prize for literature writer, and a blank line is spaced between them. It is a wonderful story and a great entry. Continue the good progress. My Skype: brian.madden4
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Thank you! :))))
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Кто есть "мы"? Когда ты встретила её ты можешь сказать: We met at the dance classes when we were 14. or I met her at the dance classes when I was 14. ... She/Kate lives with her father and mother.
We went to dances and still skating in Winter - We went to dances and skating in Winter as well.
...she will aways be able to cheer your up!!
.. and I hope we will meet next year again/ we will see us again soon - though meet would be better.
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