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Not a special day any more
Today is the 11th of November (alternatively, one can also say Today is November 11th, there are other ways that you could convey the same meaning, but these two are the most standard), not a tranditional festival,but morden modern man becomes a fashionable one day, (super?)markets (Could also say stores as its meaning is more generalized) will have sales promotions, (simply saying sales would probably be the most colloquial(口语)) friends will meet together or talk about how to spend today. mMaybe it is the morden modern life.. however everyday will become a festival , the tranditional festival atmosphere more and more light (?) . ..
从"modern man becomes fashionable one day"开始读就读不大懂你的意思。语法现在基本上没有任何问题,但是有两个地方有逻辑问题,我觉得。那两个地方是从modern man到one day还有从Maybe it is the modern life到more and more light。除了那两个地方以外我会读懂。最后 friends will meet together or talk about how to spend today有一点点儿别扭吧,也可能存在逻辑问题。(我现在指的是or的问题,你如果用and会好一点,但是这要看你是啥意思)
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