【an essay about tax revenue】thx :p

topic:
People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extend do u agree or disagree.
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As an increasing number of countries have become high welfare states, the tax revenue played is playing a considerably more essential role. However, it is a hotly-debated issue that whether or not citizens should pay taxes to the state. As far as I am concerned, people could cannot escape from the paying taxes because of its importance.
Tax revenue is indispensable in modern society. To start with, this methodology is an effective tool to bridge the gap between the rich and poor. It indicates that the government shoulders the obligation to of helping impoverished people with the money coming from richer people, aiming aimed to maintain social stability. Besides, only in this way can the authorities invest in the infrastructure. For instance, easing the traffic conjunction is an urgent problem that the state can take advantage of tax revenue to better the traffic system. All above Above all, this practice is not only a responsibility for all of the citizens, but also shows our patriotism towards the state.
As what we cannot deny, we are indeed concerned about whether the money can be used effectively and properly. Some people claim that they should keep all the money they earn cause it is no longer an unusual phenomenon that some officials are corruption with the tax or invest it in some useless aspects. But I believe this situation can be avoided as long as we take corrective measures. One point I would like to make is concerning about monitor regulation. The government should clarify the tax plan to the public who can take participant in the democratic decision-making.
In summary, from that we discussed above; it is easy to draw the conclusion that tax revenue is beneficial to the individual and society under the public monitor.

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