First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody, my name is Sarah.  I just graduated from school and now, I am working as a foreign salesman.  I love English, and I hope that you and me I* can become friends.

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Nice job.^^  

* It's more correct to say "you and I", but most people, when speaking, will say "you and me" or "me and you". 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody!, My name is Sarah. I just graduated from school and now, I am working as a foreign salesman. I love English, and I hope that you and me I can become friends.

*Your are using commas incorrectly; commas do not end a sentence. Commas are used as pauses in a sentence and to separate related material in a sentence. For Example "I opened the door, but I didn't find anything." or "I put carrots, chicken, and spices in the soup." or "if you need something, then just ask." I hope this helps.*

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,everybody,my name is Sarah.I just graduated from school and now,I am working as a foreign salesman.I love English,hope that you and I can become friends.