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Will Social Networking (QQ , Weibo ,email , etc ) Destroy Good Writing ? Nowadays social networking such as QQ has become a fashion tool for people to communicate with others and express themselves .For this phenomenon ,many people definitely think that using social networking overmuch will destroy people's good writing . But there also are a large number of people have the opposite ideas . For my part ,I am in favor of that social networking will destroy good writing ,which not only because ut can cause some writing problems , but also will impede native speakers to communicate with foreigners . Using social networking overmuch will cause some writing problems .It is very common that people who always use QQ and things like that to talk to others always use " simplified " words at the conversation .In such cases ,they just pay a little attention to spelling and grammar , which is very likely to destroy their writing skills . What is more , we must admit that the word we used on the social networking are unclear and half-baked , and it may cause some misunderstanding and confusion when we talk to foreigners . Since many people like to chose social networking as a way to learn a new language , it is very possible that they just learned a bad writing habits . According to what have mentioned above ,we can come to conclusion that if we use social networking overmuch , it not only can destroy our writing skills but also drive us to set up a bad habit of writing . And in order to avoid the shortcoming of social networking to spoil our life , we should make a good use of it .

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Will Social Networking (QQ, Weibo, email, etc ) Destroy Good Writing?

Nowadays, social networks such as QQ have become a fashionable tools for people to communicate with others and express themselves. For With this phenomenon, many people definitely think that using social networking overmuch will destroy people's good writing. But However, there also are a large number of people that have the opposite ideas.

For my part From my perspective, I am in favor of the idea that social networking will destroy good writing. which Not only because it can cause some writing problems, but it also will impede on native speakers' ability to communicate with foreigners.

Using social networks overmuch will cause some writing problems. It is very common for that people who always use QQ and things like that to talk to others always use "simplified" words at the conversation dialogue. In such cases, they just pay a little attention to spelling and grammar, which is very likely to destroy their writing skills.

What is more, we must admit that the words we used on the social networks are unclear and half-baked, and it may cause some misunderstanding and confusion when we talk to foreigners. Since many people like to chose social networks as a way to learn a new language, it is very possible that they will just learned a bad writing habits.

According to what I have mentioned above, we can come to conclude that if we use social networking overmuch, it not only can destroy our writing skills, but also drive us to set up a bad habit of writing. And In order to avoid the shortcoming of social networking to spoil our life, we should make a good better use of it.

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