what is love?

What is love? Maybe you will think it's a silly question. But I bet still a lot of people cannot tell. I have read and watched plenty of love stories and films, I like to read them, they are fun but still far from reality. What is 'love' in real life? Is it a prepared breakfast in the morning or just a word 'I can't live without you!', '我想你想得睡不着觉'? Is it a beautiful jewelry, fancy cars and big house or just a rose with a true heart? Or it just a thing should be go with honest, understand and responsibility?

I never had a time when '我想你想得睡不着觉', and does that mean i don't understand love? I don't think love is a constaint and eternal thing though. It will chang as time gose by. Mom told me that love will be replaced by affection and friendship between a couple, and I think it make sense.

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What is Love?

What is love?  Maybe you think this is a silly question.  But I bet a lot of people cannot answer.  I have read many love stories and watched many romantic films.  I like them.  They are fun but still far from reality.  What is love in real life?  Is it breakfast made for you every morning or just the words "I can't live without you!", "我想你想得睡不着觉'?  Is it beautiful jewelry, fancy cars and a big house or just a rose with a steadfast heart?  Or is it just a thing that should go with honesty, understanding and responsibility?

I've never had a time when "我想你想得睡不着觉".  Does this mean I don't understand love?  I don't think love is a constant and eternal thing though.  It will change as time passes.  My mom told me that between a couple love will be replaced by affection and friendship.  I think that makes sense.

That was really written very well.  I only made a few minor corrections on word choice.  One thing you should watch out for is run-on sentences.  There were a few instances where you had several thoughts combined into one sentence which could very easily be split into two sentences.