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happy Thank you,everybody to see my diary.Thank you very much. Today,I was very happy because my friends Harry and Mango are went to my home and played with me.Mango is smart to playing comeputer games and Harry is studies very hard.They are all boys and all good boys.We were the classmate of primary school.Now Harry is going to No.8 Middle School.But Mango and I are going to the other middle school.

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Happy

Thank you everybody who corrects my diary's errors. Thank you very much.

Today, I was very happy because my friends Harry and Mango came to my home and played with me. Mango is smart at playing computer games. Harry studies very hard. They are both boys and very good. We were classmates in primary school. Now Harry is going to No.8 Middle School. Mango and I are going to another middle school.

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"Today, I was"... -If the day is not over and you are still happy, then you can say "Today, I am..." "Harry and Mango came to my house to play"... -You don't really need to say "with me". Your language already implies that they are at your house to play with you. "They are all boys and all good boys." -There are only two boys. Better to say "both of them good boys". "But Mango and I are going to the other middle school." -THE other middle school? This means we should know your school already but we don't so better to say "another middle school". These are some small details. It was written well for a middle school student.
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happy

Thank you everybody, to see  for reading my diary.Thank you very much.

Today,I was very happy because my friends Harry and Mango are went came to my home and played with me.Mango is smart to at playing comeputer computer games and Harry is studies very hard.They are all boys and all good boys.We were the classmates of in primary school.Now Harry is going to No.8 Middle School.But Mango and I are going to the other middle school.

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