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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I`m student. I am studying computer technology, and my dream is to become programmer. I like my friends and my family and often walk with them. I like music and photo. I study English because I want know this language and my dream is traveling the world.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I`m a student, studying computer technology, and I dream of becoming a programmer. I like my friends and my family and often go for walks with them. I like music and photography. I'm learning English because I want to know this language and I dream traveling the world.
Hello and welcome, Ksusha :)
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I`m a student. I am studying computer technology, and dream will become about becoming a programmer. I like my friends and my family and often walk ( ?) with them. I like music and photo. I study English because I wont don't know this language and I dream about traveling on all over the world.
Hi Ksusha, I think you can do it better. When you wrote "walk" maybe you mean "talk". The rest of it, it's fine, I like it!!
Good luck dear! I'm sure you'll improve your English very soon.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I`m (a)student. I study computer technology, and dream will become programmer(and I dream to be a programmer). I like my friends and my family and often walk with them. I like music and photo. I study English because I wont (want to)know this language and I dream traveling on the world(I hope that oneday i could traveling thoughout the world).
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