多用必要的介词会是你的语言更完备，才能说中国化的汉语。

Ray, "你需要更多的语言交流，just say" was not necessary to be made, especially since you need more practice yourself(it should be 'just saying' not 'just say') I think Suzanne knows she needs to improve. Nobody has the right to criticize anyone here, because nobody on italki speaks the language they are learning perfectly. If we did, we wouldn't be here. To be fair, She didn't make any mistakes as for as sentence structure goes. The only mistakes made in her journal entry were typos, like 回 being used instead of 会,which even Chinese people make sometimes. A lot of words in Chinese have the same sound but have different meanings such as 的 and 得, so when typing fast or not paying attention, one can easily overlook that(I have Chinese friends who do that). Suzanne, I really tip my hat to you and anyone else who gives a shot at learning another language. Don't let anyone discourage you. Nobody is perfect.