not happy
These days i am not happy,mood is down.Everyday i listen to music,watch tv show and eat delicious food.Only want to improve my mood.How hope i can lie down the green grassland,close eyes and think nothing.How hope i can hike with friends talk,laugh and trick.HAHA....that is nice.Yesterday my best friends called me,she said she missed me a lot.Her words made me warmed.Although we dont stay in same city,but our hearts are together.That is enough.So i should bestir myself,everything is ok,my heart will be strong.Cheer up! Fighting!
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not happy
These days I am not happy; my mood is down. Everyday I listen to music, watch TV, and eat delicious food. I only want to improve my mood. I want to lie down in the green grasslands, close my eyes and think of nothing. I want to hike with friends, talk, laugh, and fool around. HAHA....that would be nice. Yesterday, my best friend called me. She said she missed me a lot. Her words made warmed me. Although we aren't in same city, our hearts are together. That is enough. So I should tell myself: "everything is OK, my heart will be strong." Cheer up! Keep fighting!
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not happy
These days i am not happy. My mood is down.Everyday i listen to music,watch tv shows, and eat delicious food. I only want to improve my mood. How hope i can I want to lie down in the green grassland,close my eyes, and think about nothing. How hope i can I want to hike with friends, talk,laugh, and trick each other.HAHA....that would be is nice.Yesterday my best friends called me and she said she missed me a lot.Her words made me feel warmed.Although we dont stay in same city,but our hearts are together.That is enough.So i should bestir myself. Everything is ok and my heart will be strong.Cheer up! Fighting!
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Hi. In all, it wasn't a bad entry. There were some unnecessary parts, and there were some parts that didn't make too much sense. I altered it a little in order to make it a bit more understandable. By "trick", I figured you meant having fun with your friends and chilling. Also, "bestir" is not a word. Hope I was of help. +)
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thank you !
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Emptiness.
That's the word to describe your feeling now, I guess? Well, sometimes I would ask myself what is the point of working so hard and I should be travelling around the world. However, when reality seeps in again, I am back to doing what I have been doing all along. Well, c'est-la-vie...
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