First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello,My name is Shan~I am a Chinese boy,I am a high school student,I like learning foreign language and make friend with other people.Do you like Chinese?If y

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello,My name is Shan~I am a Chinese boy,I am a high school student,I like learning foreign language and make friend with other people.Do you like Chinese?If you like and have some question about Chinese,I will help you:)~I think the best to learn language is chatting.When I chat with my friend,I can learn some new words from our chatting~^ ^~

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my name is Shan. I am a Chinese boy. I am a high school student. I like learning foreign languages and make friends with other people.Do you like Chinese? If you like and have some questions about Chinese,I will help you:)~I think the best way to learn language is chatting.When I chat with my friend,I can learn some new words from our chat.ting~^ ^~

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Good first entry. :)

1，标点间隔有问题。2，有些地方的用法不当了。3，习惯上，一般是I'll, 而不是I will，一般是I'm，而不是I am。4，有一句前后一致出了问题。

I think you first notebook very good,

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