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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm glad to meet everybody from all over the world.
I majored in English when i was in college, but my oral [spoken] english and listening skills are both not quite good, still quite poor.
and After 4 years working 4 years in a training school and a junior high school doing where I did the same stuff all day roud things every day i bet i am far behind in English.
Now i have to bend concentrate on not only learning not only to practice my spoken english and making more friends abroad but also to on preparing for the an interpreting course coming in I will be taking in 4 months.
This sentence must be consistent. Since you wrote learning, you must also write making and preparing. I used "on preparing" instead of "to preparing" because the "on" is referring to "[concentrate] on preparing"
I am concentrating on reading Chinese characters, speaking Chinese words and listening to Chinese phrases.
I'm looking forward fo your response and hope to make friends with you.
Whenever you refer to yourself, you must capitalize "i" , changing it to "I". I didn't correct this in the paragraph because you made this same mistake many many times and I didn't want to correct it every time.
Do not use "u" in place of "you". This is a bad habit that many students make because they text (cell phone short message) so often.
# Great effort! Don't give up your English studies! 我看起来你很努力得写!读英文不要失望!
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Glad to meet everybody all over the world. I majored in english when I was in college, but my oral eng and listening are both not quite good, and after 4 years of work in training school and junior high doing the same stuff all day round I bet I am far behind in English. Now I have to bend on learning not only to practice my spoken English and make more friends abroad but also to prepare for the interpreting course coming in 4 months. I'm looking forward fo your response and hope to make friends with you.
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