Sorry, I vomited.
Last weekends, Our company taken us to travel to Nankun mountain. It has taken three hours to get there by bus. After the bus entered the mountain, I felt sick. Although I ate ginger, smeared some acupuncture points with cool and refreshing oil. At last my stomach twisted, I vomited. Then the poor girl sat beside me vomited all the food she had eaten...I am so sorry for her.
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Sorry, I vomited.
Last weekends, Our my company taken took us to traveling to Nankun mountain.
如果你用 Our 就表示读者和你在一样的公司工作
It has taken took three hours to get there by bus.
After the bus entered arrived at the mountain, I felt sick.
如果你用 entered 就表示公车 进 去山
用 arrived at 表示公车 到 山
Although I ate ginger and smeared some acupuncture points with cool and refreshing oil, I still felt sick. At last my stomach twisted and I vomited. Then Afterwards, the poor girl who sat besides me also vomited all the food she had eaten...I am felt so sorry for her.
你先吐然后那女子又吐？真恶心。我现在也想吐。。。是个连锁反应！^^
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"Then the poor girl sat beside me vomited all the food she had eaten "
Did she also vomite when you had vomited ?
That's awesome
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