I and reason (could you please explain what this means?  it doesn't make sense to me!)

I am chinese, and (It doesn't mean anything and perhaps you don't want me to be so pedantic, but if you wish to achieve perfect writing skills I'll explain, but if you're not interested, let me know?  I'll understand.  the purpose of this comment was to advisethe comma is redundant as the conjunction "and" doesn't require it.) was an english student, but my english is not good. I tried some ways to improve my english, then (on the other hand, "then" is not a conjuction and ought not be used qas one.  You could have used "but", "however", "and", etc.) Oops!  I must leave.  I'll send this and complete the rest later.) I failed. But with my working, I find english more and more important. So I never give up.
This is a way to improve english, but i think making friends is more intresting and important.
I like cartoon, and i read many Japanese cartoon, but more and more Japanese cartoons are "fan service", i don't like this. Please forgive me.
I can also speak a little Japanese. I like Japanese native music.
That's all!