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Derpy 日本語 01 - いざかやのこと
Derpy 日本語 Entry 01
九月、いざかや(Bar?)のにアルバイトをゲットしました。はじめてのアルバイトで、ちょっとむずかしいです。そのいざかやのだいどころでさらをきれいにします。する。それに、まだがっこうのことがあります。ほんとうにむずかしいですが、がんばるとだいじょうぶになるのでしょうね。
In September, I got a job at a bar. It's my first job, and it's a little difficult. I wash dishes in the kitchen. Furthermore, I'm still involved in school. It's very difficult, but if I do my best, I'll be okay, right?
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I'm going to try and start writing as often as possible in Japanese. I've shied away from doing so previously because I'm very self-conscious about my skill level... but, if I get the chance to go to Japan or I meet more Japanese people and make friends with them, and I've not been practicing, I probably will give up on the opportunities that pass by... and I can't do that, can I?
Hi!
I am sure you can improve Japanese soon! your Japanese is really good;)
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Derpy 日本語 01 - いざかやのこと
Derpy 日本語 Entry 01
九月、いざかや(Bar?)にのアルバイトをゲットしました。はじめてのアルバイトで、ちょっとむずかしいです。そのいざかやの1 だいどころちゅうぼう(厨房)でさらをきれいにするあらいます(洗います)。それに、まだがっこうのことがあります。ほんとうにむずかしいですが たいへんですが、がんばるとがんばればだいじょうぶでしょうね。
In September, I got a job at a bar. It's my first job, and it's a little difficult. I wash dishes in the kitchen. Furthermore, I'm still involved in school. It's very difficult, but if I do my best, I'll be okay, right?
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Note:
I'm going to try and start writing as often as possible in Japanese. I've shied away from doing so previously because I'm very self-conscious about my skill level... but, if I get the chance to go to Japan or I meet more Japanese people and make friends with them, and I've not been practicing, I probably will give up on the opportunities that pass by... and I can't do that, can I?
赤(Red) : 修正(correction)
青(Blue) : 提案 (suggestion) /より自然(more natural)
1. A kichen in restaurants is called ちゅうぼう, while だいどころ is in a house.
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