2011年10月23日
今天我做了很多功课。我写了很多论文。还我练习汉语。今天我很忙！
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每天一点点，天天向上。
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I think it may be better if you could say "今天我很忙" in the first place, like this:
2011年10月23日
今天我很忙！我做了很多功课, 写了很多论文。我还练习了汉语。
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I think the work contains the eassy,so you had better write in this way:今天我做了很多功课。其中有很多是论文。After that ,I think adding a connective word in front of "我还练习汉语" such as "另外"“此外”.It will be OK in some cases.I expect it will be a little help for you.
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哈哈,你每天都坚持写一小段中文小日记,不错不错
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2011年10月23日
今天我做了很多功课。我写了很多论文。还我还练习了汉语。今天我很忙！
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