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My english name is Flora ,I just graduated from a high school in BeiJing in this year.I planning to go to UK for my undergraduate studies .So I have to join the IELTS exam for application the best school. While my english level is very poor ,lead to I need some foreign friend can help me enhance english score.
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My English name is Flora. I just graduated from a high school in Beijing in this year.[space] I am planning to go to the UK for my undergraduate studies, so I have to join sit the IELTS exam for application applying for the best school. While my english level is very poor[no space],lead to I need a some foreign friend who can help me enhance my English score.
Hello, Flora! Welcome to italki! I would be more than happy to help if you need any help with English. Good luck with your IELTS test!
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1，标点问题。2，该大写的没有大写。3，时态没有用好。4，注意单复数问题。5，词语搭配不当。例子：the application to the best school.6，文法不当。
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