Hello world! :) Please, correct my first note here.

Please, correct my first note:  (English uses commas far less than Slavic languages)
I live in Moscow, in the Russian Federation. I work as an engineer and a little bit as a businessman.
I have a beautiful wife and a cute little baby. We like to travel often and talk with lots of interesting people from different countries. 

However, my English is poor and I intend to improve it as soon as possible.

Thanks a lot!

This is actually quite a well-written note. So I guess you want more practice with speaking? :)

Hello,_ World! :) Please, correct my first note here._

Please, correct my first note:
I live in Moscow, Russian Federation. I work as an engineer and a little bit as a businessman.
I have a beautiful wife and a cute little baby. So often we like to travel and talk with lots of interesting people from different countries.
But my English is poor and I tend to improve it as soon as possible.

Thanks a lot

Hello world! :) Please, correct my first note here

Please, correct my first note:

I live in Moscow, Russian Federation. I work as an engineer and a little bit as a businessman.
I have a beautiful wife and a cute little baby. Often, we like to travel and talk with lots of interesting people from different countries.
My English is poor though so I want to improve it as soon as possible.

Thanks a lot.