my feeling I am very sad now,but calm,like the water in the lake,not boil,not bubble. I like making friends,but meanwhile i want to be alone,especially when i get angry or sad.i prefer go for a walk

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my feeling I am very sad now,but calm,like the water in the lake,not boil,not bubble. I like making friends,but meanwhile i want to be alone,especially when i get angry or sad.i prefer go for a walk by myself rather than talk with friends heart to heart.sometimes i even hate friends accompany me,like today.my sister-friend,i had been dodging her.For this,i feel me like a prisoner.

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I think people who like staying alone sometimes are deeper than those who always need someone alongside.

不要忘在标点符号后面放空格，这很重要，中文和英文的字体不一样！

中式标点符号：“。” --> 已经在后面有空格

英式标点符号：“.” --> 没有空格。你在后面要加一个

my feeling

I am very sad now,_but calm,_like the water in the lake,_not boiling,_not bubbling.
I like making friends,_but meanwhile I want to be alone,_especially when I get angry or sad._I prefer go for a walk by myself rather than talk with friends heart to heart._Sometimes I even hate friends accompany me,_like today._My sister-friend,_I had been dodging her._For this,I feel me like a prisoner.

写得不错，加油 :)

此外，"sister-friend" 从英文翻译成中文不很容易。有可能你应该说 "close friend" 或者 "best friend"

要是你想跟我一起练习英文，我很乐意帮助你英文水平 :)

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