my new decision
Today i am badly annoyed by a pair of high-heel .
Duriing the interview , i was asked to do some comprehension about one pair of high heel ,that's difficult for me , i didn't understand all of them so i didin't have a good permance . then at the beginning of the dialogue, the interviewer said :no wonder ,your major is not English , this nearly drove me insane .oh my god ,may be i was bule in face at that moment.......
then i returned home , i had been thought for all afternoon ,yeath, he is true , my English is not as strong as the guys' whoes major is English, i must permit and take some effective act :learn . continue to learn new concept .
and i will write one composition each day from now on .
cheer up !
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my new decision
Today i am badly annoyed by a pair of high-heel .
During the interview , i was asked to do some comprehension about a pair of high heel ,that's difficult for me , i didn't understand all of them so i didin't make a good performance . after seeing my comprehensition , the interviewer said :no wonder ,your major is not English , this nearly drove me insane .oh my god ,may be i was blue in face at that moment.......
then i returned home , i had been thinking the whole afternoon ,yeath, he is right , my English is not as strong as the guys' whoes major is English, i must recognize this and take some effective action :learn . continue to learn new concept .
and i will write one composition each day from now on .
cheer up !
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thank you .
and thank you for your modify , i will write it again .
if there is still some mistakes ,please point out .
many thanks .
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my new decision
Today i am badly annoyed by a pair of high-heel .
Duriing [During] the interview , i was asked to do some comprehension about one a pair of high heel, that was difficult for me. I didn't understand all of them so i didin't have a good permance [I do not understand this sentence] . Then at the beginning of the dialogue, the interviewer said: "no wonder your major is not English" [I think this is the end of the qoute] This nearly drove me insane. Oh my god, may be I was bule blue in face at that moment.......
then i returned home , i had been thought thinking for all the whole afternoon. yeath, he is true right, my English is not as strong as the guys' whoese major is English. I must permit [I do not understand this] and take some effective action: learn, continue to learn new concept .
and i will write one composition each day from now on .
cheer up !
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Its good that you took his words as a stepping stone to take your English to another level. I should agree though that it was not a good comment at all and there are a lot of other better ways he could have expressed his point.
Cheer!
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