First notebook entry: Introducing Myself

Hello, everyone! I'm an optimistic, humorous person of humor. I was born in a beautiful city namedJlinLin Jilin. I very love my hometown very much. In order to life I have lived in Beijing, the fast a hectic urban place of unban.
I like the outdoorssopors,'cuse I suppose because I like nature.
My dream is to be able to speak a foreign language, for later a better life later.

First notebook entry: Introducing Myself

hello everyone, I'm an optimistic ,person of humor. Was born in a beautiful city JiLin, I very love my town.In order to life I lived Beijing,the fast place of unban.
I like outdoor sopors,'cuse like nature.
My dream is to be able to speak a foreign language, for later a better life.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! I'm an optimistic ,humorous person. I was  born in a beautiful city named JlinLin, I  love my hometown very much.I have  lived  in Beijing,a hectic unban place.
I like the  outdoors ,I suppose because I like nature.
My dream is to be able to speak a foreign language, for a better life later.

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Randy 谢谢您的修改，非常细心！