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A happy event My trip to Nanjing in 2009 was a happy event in my past life. There are a couple of reasons as for why I would like to talk specifically about that unforgettable trip. I went there is for Super Junior's concert. I had to say I spent a wonderful night in their concert. I was drawn into the beautiful stage,the handsome guys on the whole night. Also,I met my high school classmate who studied in Nanjing. Lastly and the most important is the fact that when I arrived the Nanjing airport the next day,I found that I was on the same flight with Hangeng,a member of the Super Junior,who is my favorite star. Actually,it was compeletly by accident,so I was so excited about that. I closely followed him through the gate. Until now I still feel it fantastic.As for me,it has a huge happy ending.

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Very well written, your English is great! Just don't forget to put a space after all of your commas and periods, the English font doesn't add it for you the way that the Chinese font does! Some small mistakes but mostly natural and 100% understandable
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A happy event

My trip to Nanjing in 2009 was a happy event in my past life. There are a couple of reasons as for to why I would like to talk specifically about that unforgettable trip.
I went there for a Super Junior's concert. I have to say I spent a wonderful night in their concert. I was drawn in by the beautiful stage, the handsome guys on the whole night.
Also,I met my high school classmate who studied in Nanjing.
Lastly and most importantly is the fact that when I arrived at Nanjing airport the next day,I found that I was on the same flight with Hangeng,a member of the Super Junior,who is my favorite star. Actually,it was compeletly by accident,so I was so excited about that. I closely followed him through the gate. Even now I still feel it fantastic. As for me,it was a huge happy ending.

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