Hi , my friends that come from all over the world! This is my instruction!
My friends:
Hi , my friends that come from all over the world! This is my instruction!
First ,I want to tell you a secret, that's, I'm a honest Chinese man.
Second, I studied many Chinese history, included 24 famous and typical history books. I can tell you many Chinese.
Third, I want to tell everyone I will be you good friend. I like to study western cultrles and history.
I have a dream. That one day Chinese people everyone will own one vote which belong to their right. They can vote the country's leaders which they like.
My English is so poor that I have to use the translate soft to help me. Can you help me to edit it?
Thank you!
your friend Mr Lee
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Hi , my friends that come from all over the world! This is my instruction(personal introduction)!
My friends:
Hi , my friends that come from all over the world! This is my instruction(personal introduction)!!
First(first of all) ,I want to tell you a secret, that's, (which is) I'm a(an) honest Chinese man.
Secondly, I studied many Chinese history (I have rich knowledge about Chinese history), included 24 famous and typical history books(这句话我是中国人也看不明白:p，读过24本有名的典型的历史书？）. I can tell you many Chinese(much about Chinese history).
Thirdly, I want to tell everyone I will(would like to) be your good friend. I like to study (studying) Western cultrles(culture) and history.
I have a dream. That that one day every Chinese people everyone will own one vote which belong to their right would have the real rights for voting. They can (could?) vote the country's leaders which whom they like.
My English is so poor that I have to use the translating software to help me for help. Can you help me to edit it?
Thank you!
your friend Mr Lee
My English is also not good, hope it could be helpful to you..
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