First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Nice to meet you,everyone~~My name's Victoria and I come from China.Now I live in Beijing.I'm fond of watching movies and books.I love pets such as dogs and cats.And my favorite star is Hangeng,a Chinese singer and actor.
Recently I'm watching the Big Bang Theory.I'm the big fan of Sheldon.That's why I want to study English as soon as possible.If I do it well,I can watch the sitcom without subtitle.
I have studied English for many years,but I still think my English is poor for I rarely write some compositions and hardly speak it.I hope this website will help me improve my English,including speaking and writing.
That's all.Thanks for reading.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Nice to meet you,everyone~~My name's Victoria and I come from China.Now I live in Beijing.I'm fond of watching movies and books.I love pets such as dogs and cats.And my favorite star is Hangeng,a Chinese singer and actor.
Recently I'm watching the Big Bang Theory.I'm the big fan of Sheldon.That's why I want to study English as soon as possible.If I do it well,I can watch the sitcom without subtitle.
I have studied English for many years,but I still think my English is poor for I rarely write some compositions and hardly speak it.I hope this website will help me improve my English,including speaking and writing.
That's all.Thanks for reading.
Nice to meet you, everyone, my name is Victoria and I come from China. Now I live in Beijing. I am fond of watching movies and reading books. My favourite star is Hangeng, a Chinese singer and actor.
I love pets such as dogs and cats. Recently I have been watching the Big Bang Theory .I am a big fan of Sheldon. That's why I want to study English as much as possible. If I do it well, I can watch the sitcom without subtitles.
I have studied English for many years, but I still think my English is poor for I rarely write some compositions and hardly speak it. I hope this website will help me improve my English, including speaking and writing.
That's all, thanks for reading.
A couple of comments... dont forget spaces after full stops. Try not to jump around and put sentances in the middle of a paragraph that does not relate to the general topic of the paragraph. Your composition was pretty good.. well done!!!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Nice to meet you, everyone. My name's Victoria and I come from China. I live in Beijing. I'm fond of watching movies and reading books. I love pets such as dogs and cats. My favorite star is Hangeng, a Chinese singer and actor.
Recently I've been watching the Big Bang Theory. I'm a big fan of Sheldon. That's why I want to study English as soon as possible. If I do it well, I can watch the sitcom without subtitles.
I have studied English for many years, but I still think my English is poor, for I rarely write some compositions and hardly speak it. I hope this website will help me improve my English, especially speaking and writing.
That's all. Thanks for reading.
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Nice to meet you here Victoria! I hope to talk with you soon.
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I think your English is fruent and the passage is well-written. I'm also from China. I'm a new memeber of italki. I hope we can enjoy a good time and gain a lot through this website. By the way, nice to meet you, too. You are still a colllege student, aren't you?
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