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It's raining.... Now it's raining in my city but not too heavy. Do you like the raining day? um,whatever,i like the raining day.like walking in the rain with my friends. like to remember yesterday,like to hear the drops. so raining is happy actually,in the city,there will be more and more raining days .and you know we will be entry the winter soon just like the song"may the wind go down with the leaf ,may the snow go with the sea ~~" just enjoy the season,enjoy yourself!!

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It's raining here too. But rainy days make me tired and give me a headache. I'm glad you like the rain. :)
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I don't know about you but I really hate rainy days, specially when it falls on the weekdays. It's hard to commute and to go to work. It makes me sad too :( But I like to dance in the rain, I want to experience it with someone. I think it's so romantic like what I usually see in the movies. Aaaaaw ;)
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Hi, I made some corrections here, check it out.

 

It's raining....

Now it's raining in my city but not too heavy.
Do you like the raining day?

=Do you like rainy days?
um,whatever,i like the raining day.

=um, Whatever. I like rainy days.

like walking in the rain with my friends.

=I like to  walk in the rain with my friends.

like to remember yesterday,like to hear the drops.

=I like to remember yesterday, I like to hear the rain drops.

so raining is happy

=So rainy days make me happy.
actually,in the city,there will be more and more raining days .and you know we will be entry the winter soon

=Actually in the city, it rains more and you know it will be winter soon.

just like the song"may the wind go down with the leaf ,may the snow go with the sea ~~"

=Just like the song " may the wind go down with the leaf ,may the snow go with the sea ~~"
just enjoy the season,enjoy yourself!!

=Just enjoy the season, enjoy yourself.

 


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a pity thing. It is hard to take a taxi in raining day. After have supper with my colleague, we found the rain outside was heavy, and there were so many people want to take taxi. We waited about a half hour and finally took a taxi.

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