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It's raining....
Now it's raining in my city but not too heavy.
Do you like the raining day?
=Do you like rainy days?
um,whatever,i like the raining day.
=um, Whatever. I like rainy days.
like walking in the rain with my friends.
=I like to walk in the rain with my friends.
like to remember yesterday,like to hear the drops.
=I like to remember yesterday, I like to hear the rain drops.
so raining is happy
=So rainy days make me happy.
actually,in the city,there will be more and more raining days .and you know we will be entry the winter soon
=Actually in the city, it rains more and you know it will be winter soon.
just like the song"may the wind go down with the leaf ,may the snow go with the sea ~~"
=Just like the song " may the wind go down with the leaf ,may the snow go with the sea ~~"
just enjoy the season,enjoy yourself!!
=Just enjoy the season, enjoy yourself.
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