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Malay Good evening:) Today, I went to the office to make advertisements. Last time what I asked to help to correct in my diary is for my school. And the advertisements are also for the school. Thank you for helping, you two:)) One of the advertisements is in English. The other is in Chinese. Of course, I can't write Chinese. So I asked my friend to translate English to Chinese. Both of the design of advertisements are same. I'm afraid I don't have any talent in design. lol Oh it's time to do Black Jack with my friends!

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Both of the design of advertisements are same. 

1. Both of the advertisement designs are the same.

or 2. The design of both advertisements are the same.

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I cannot explain - but these sentences (1 and 2) sound better.

Excellent paragraph! It's so good - only that one sentence sounded a little weird.

Good luck with Blackjack - sounds fun.

 

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