Help~x(

Please help me x(!!
I have made the document that is for my Japanese language school,

Better say: I have made the document for my Japanese language school,

but I don't think it's correct.

So if someone have free time, please help me to correct below the sentences.

Better say:So if someone has a free time, please help me correct the sentences below.


1) Why do you want to enter our school?
If you have something that you want to do in the future such as a dream, please write down it as well.

Better say:If you have something that you want to do in the future such as a dream, please write  it down as well.

ex. Because I want to be a English teacher in Japan. So I thought I should study in Japan.

=Because I want to be an English teacher in Japan. So I thought I should study in Japan.
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2) What extend do you want to be able to speak?

1 can use when you trip in Japan

=can  use when you travel Japan

2 can speak everyday conversation
3 can watch the Japanese movies
4 can work part-time in Japan
5 can work full-time in Japan
6 another ( )

3) Have you ever studied Japanese?

1 yes 2 No

if you answered 'yes' please answer below the questions.

=if you answered 'yes' please answer the questions below.

How long? ( )
When?( )
Where or who? ex. Friend, ○○school. ( )

4) Do you have a Japanese singer who you like?

=Do you have a Japanese singer whom you like?

If you have, please write down the name.
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Hi,

These are some of the corrections noted. I edited some. I hope it helps.~~~

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　thank you!

Help~x(

Please help me x(!!
I have made the document that is for my Japanese language school, but I don't think it's correct English. So if someone have free time, please help me to correct below the sentences.


1) Why do you want to attend our school?
Please include your future goals
ex. I want to teach English in Japan so I want to learn Japanese.
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2) What extent do you want to be able to speak?

1 basic phrases for travel
2 Daily conversation
3 Understanding Japanese media, like movies
4 fluency at work
5 can work full-time in Japan
6 other reason

3) Have you ever studied Japanese?

1 yes 2 No

if you answered 'yes' please answer below the questions below.
How long? ( )
When?( )
Where or who? ex. Friend, ○○school. ( )

4) Do you have a Japanese singer who you like?
If you have, please write down the name.
( )

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　thank you!

1) Why do you want to enter our school?
If you have something that you want to do in the future such as a dream, please write down it as well. 
>>>>>>>>   please write it down as well.   
 
2) What extend do you want to be able to speak?

>>>>>>>>>>>>> To what extent do you want to be able to speak?

or How well do you want to speak?
 
1 can use when you trip in Japan   >>>> when you travel in Japan?
2 can speak everyday conversation >>>>>can make everyday conversation?
3 can watch the Japanese movies >>>>>>> can watch movies without subtitles?
4 can work part-time in Japan
5 can work full-time in Japan
6 another ( ) 
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I made 5 corrections. I think it is good.