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I got my passport I got my passport yesterday. I hope I can travel round the word just like Li Na in the Nike advertisement did (http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzA5MTM0NDc2.html) . She showed her passport to a officer when she entering a country. And her passport is full of visas from different countries. It's quite interesting that I saw this advertisement only days ago when I watching a football game alive in the internet. Moreover, I thought it is like, awesome, at the first time I saw this advertisement. In all, I had my passport and I am happy.

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I got my passport.

I got my passport yesterday.

I hope I can travel around the world just like what Li Na did in the Nike advertisement. did (http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzA5MTM0NDc2.html). She showed her passport to an officer when she was entering a country. (even when leaving, I suppose) And Her passport is full of visas from different countries. It's quite interesting that I saw this advertisement only days ago when I was watching a football game alive in the internet. Moreover, I thought it is like awesome, at the first time I saw it. this advertisement.

In all At last, I've had my passport and I am happy.

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I got my passport

I got my passport yesterday.

I hope I can travel around the word just like Li Na in the Nike advertisement did (http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMzA5MTM0NDc2.html) . She showed her passport to an officer when she entering a country. And her passport is was full of visas from different countries. It's quite interesting that I saw this advertisement only days ago when I was watching a football game alive in on the internet. Moreover ("moreover" doesn't really make sense here, also we almost never use that word.) , I thought it is was like, awesome, at the first time I saw this advertisement.

In all (I don't know what you mean by "in all"), I had have my passport and I am happy.

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I am happy for you too, David! The passport is like gateway for you to go to other countries and finally reach your dream! :)

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