Four months, mang changes
Haven't written composition in there more than 4 months. Maybe for some people 4 months is very short, because there are no change in these months, but for me it is a special 4 months. I was a student 4 months ago, (cry) but now I worked far from my family, have done many things that I thought impossible before, I found I can be so heart strong, what male can do and I can do too, I am not weak than male.
The days that female stay at home and take care of baby has gone, I will to do as a male, has a own career and travel around.
Female should broaden their horizon, so that their heart will be more widely. I like this sentence, and I will do my best to make it come true.
Come wendy! fighting!
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Four months, mang changes
I haven't written any compositions for more than four months. Four months may be too short for someone if there's no changes, but it's sepcial for me. Before that time, i was a student but now am a worker. Although working far away from my family, i still have done a lot of things that i chouldn't have imagined before. I have a strong heart which always helps. I am not weaker than anyone....
The days which women used to stay at home dealing with house work and children has gone, women are now equally treated and i of course should have my own career and dreams (such as travel the world)
Women should broaden their horizons,so that their hearts will be more wider. I like this point, and I will try my best to make it true.
Come on,wendy! Fighting!
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never,ever,forget ur dreams.
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