Innovation

Life is full of innovation and almost everywhere you look, into there is innovation. Thanks to innovation, we are able to talk to our friends as well as our family online. Thanks to innovation, we are able to explore the space outside the solar system as far as possible. Thanks to innovation, we are able to make a good use of nulear power.

With technology, we can do these things, but the reason is innovation: thanks to innovation.

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We can find innovation in every tiny detail. So comes the question: why do we innovate?Well, as the old saying goes, there is no supply if there is no demand. Obviously, we need innovation. More precisely, we innovate to improve our life, and to make our world easy, comfortable and convenient as well. Besides, sometimes we are forced to find an innovation in order not to die. For instance, we develop more and more new medicines to get rid the world of AIDS or SARS,etc. 

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So far, we have only focussed on the goodness of innovation. However - and I don't want to put a damper on it - but it can do damage or even cause disaster too if someone tries to use it for some unfriendly dangerous ideas. Chemical and biological weapons, as well as nuclear weaponry, can make us are clear enough examples for us to be aware of this. 

Yet don't be afraid of innovation ever sincefor that reason, just as we never stop driving cars because the car's exhaust pollutes the air. Instead, we are encouraged to innovate and never consider it as a tough job, because life tells us that everyone can make a difference through innovation. What's more, nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. Meanwhile, we should also be conscious of innovation in cases of using it as a means to hurt somebody, otherwise we will be hurt by it in the end.

In summary a word, innovation can beautify our world if it is well used properly of.

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Please also be careful of always starting sentences with interjections such as moreover, besides, or instead. It is fine for one or two sentences, but it is uncomfortable to read in every sentence and makes you sound unfocussed.