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The last match of Spain. Last night, Spain beat Czech Republic. Spain made a great match dominating entirely to his rival, despite of some important spanish players are injured like Iniesta or Fabregas. Spain demostrate two things. One of them , Spain always makes the football with a huge keeping ball, therefore their rivals are mesmerized and don´t know how to offset the way of playing of spanish tema. Other of them, spain has got a great bench. Althoug Fabregas o Iniesta are injured, Mata o Silva demostrated that they have step forward since ever they are playing in the premier league. Now, I am waiting the next match because I love so much watching Spain. And I wish, The team comes near where I live to go to see them.

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iniesta and fabregas didn´t play the match. Therefore, they was injured before the match. And ana... it´s not...Did they playing the match? .. i think " Did they play the match?. I should be in six level of the language school.. jejeje
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By the way, Iniesta and Fabregas were injured while they were playing the match or they had been injured before the match???. I mean, Did they playing the match? Because I don't understand what you are trying to say at the beginning of your entry.
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The last match of Spain.

Last night, Spain beat Czech Republic. Spain made a great match dominating entirely to his rival, despite of  though, some important spanish players are  like Iniesta or Fabregas were injured. So, Spain demostrate two things:

One of them (or: The first one) , Spain  Spanish team always makes the football play football with a huge keeping ball, therefore  and this is the main reason why their rivals are mesmerized and don´t  didn't know how to offset the way of playing of spanish tema team.

Other of them(or: And the other ones), Spain has got a great bench. Although, Fabregas or Iniesta were injured, Mata o Silva demostrated that they have step forward since ever they are playing in the premier league.

Now, I am waiting for the next match because I love very much watching Spanish team. And I wish, the team comes and play closer to where I live because I would have the opportunity to see them in live.

Could anybody correct his entry again? because I'm Spanish and I don't know how to correct exactly many of his mistakes...thanks in advance!

 

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