learning english--->Learning English

hi i´m from colombia.--->Hi, I'm from Colombia.

 i´m learning english so i´m here looking for news friends that can help me whit this lenguage.--->I'm learning English so I'm here looking for new friends that can help me (with this language: Esta frase es opcional)

 i wanna lern many lenguages because i love idioms.----> I wanna (o want to) learn languages because I love idioms.

i will be so greatful whit persons that help me.---> I would be so grateful to the people that help me: gramaticalmente correcta, pero

'I would be so grateful for your help' o 'I would really appreciate your help': más natural

final notes: Bold=spelling correction (ortografia), Underline=escribir con mayúscula

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