ivy的小作文: May 05, 2010
Summary of the Cartoon "the ugly duckling"
Duck mom will give birth while duck dad is very anxious. After Duck mom delivers four ducklings with beautiful yellow feather, Duck dad embraces his wife because he has been a pure father, he is so happy and please. However, the fourth duckling was born, he is different from his brother and sister, not only he wears white feather but also he has is very rough hoarse. Then dad thinks the fourth duckling isn't his baby, it should be other's, he quarerels with his wife continuelly untill he angrily departs from his wife and babies. Afterwards duck mom and other babies don't like and accept the white duckling, even they forbid the duckling to follow them, they think the whtie duckling is so ugly. Nobody plays with him so that the white duckling is great lonely, disappointed, suspicious. One day a group of white duck passes over when the ugly duckling is tearing over the lake, their feather and voice are as same as the ugly's. The group of duck says hello to the ugly duckling and welcome the duckling to play with them. Finally, the ugly duckling find his accompaniers and gets back his self-confident.
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ivy的小作文: May 05, 2010
Summary of the Cartoon "the ugly duckling"Summary of the Cartoon "The Ugly Duckling"
Duck mom will give birth while duck dad is very anxious.
Mother Duck is going to give birth, and Father Duck is very anxious.
After Duck mom delivers four ducklings with beautiful yellow feather, Duck dad embraces his wife because he has been a pure father, he is so happy and please.
Mother Duck delivers four beautiful yellow ducklings. Father Duck embraces his wife, because he is happy and pleased.
feather --> feathers
Not sure what you mean by "pure father"...
However, the fourth (?) duckling was born, he is different from his brother and sister, not only he wears white feather but also he has is very rough hoarse.
However, the fifth duckling is different from his brothers and sisters. He has white feathers and a coarse voice.
Then dad thinks the fourth duckling isn't his baby, it should be other's, he quarerels with his wife continuelly untill he angrily departs from his wife and babies.
Father Duck thinks the fifth duckling isn't his. It seems like someone else is the father. He quarrels with his wife, and eventually leaves his wife and children.
Afterwards duck mom and other babies don't like and accept the white duckling, even they forbid the duckling to follow them, they think the whtie duckling is
Mother Duck and the other children don't like and accept the white duckling. They even forbid the white duckling from following them. They think the white duckling is ugly.
Nobody plays with him so that the white duckling is great lonely, disappointed, suspicious.
None of the other ducks will play with the white duckling, so the white duckling becomes very lonely, disappointed, and suspicious.
One day a group of white duck passes over when the ugly duckling is tearing over the lake, their feather and voice are as same as the ugly's.
One day a group of white ducks passes over the ugly duckling while he is swimming on the lake. Their feathers and voices are the same as the ugly duckling's.
The group of duck says hello to the ugly duckling and welcome the duckling to play with them.
The group of swans say hello to the ugly duckling, and invite the ugly duckling to play with them.
Finally, the ugly duckling find his accompaniers and gets back his self-confident.
In the end, the ugly duckling realizes where he belongs / he is a swan, and regains his self-confidence.
This is a great effort! You have a few places where you need to work on agreement between the plural and singular.
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ivy的小作文: May 05, 2010
Summary of the Cartoon "the ugly duckling"Duck mom gives birth while duck dad is very anxious. After Duck mom delivers four ducklings with beautiful yellow feather, Duck dad embraces his wife because he has been a pure father, he is so happy and please. However, the fourth duckling was born, he is different from his brother and sister, not only he wears white feather but also he has a rough voice.
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