describe a bar chart

There is a bar chart named "Jane’s LINC Class: Average Daily Attendance, by Month", and I wrote a paragarph. HELP ME to correct it, Thank you~

Average attendance in Jane’s LINC class followed a distinct pattern over time. In Sptember, 24 students attended her calss, daily. The number of attendees peaked in October to over 25. Then, from October to December, attendances decreased steadily, with only 17 students attendeding Jane's class in December.

describe a bat char

There is a bar chart named *Jane’s LINC Class: Average Daily Attendance, by Month*, and i wrote one paragarph. HELP ME to correct it, Thank you~

Average attendance in Jane’s LINC class followed a distinct pattern over time. In September, (there were) 24 students attended her class daily.The number of (abbsent) student peaked up, in October showed over 25. Then from October to December, attendance decreased steadily. Only 17 students on average attended to Jane's class during December.

We would say "in September" to describe an entire month. We would say "on September XXth" to describe events on that one particular day.

"There were 24 students attending her class daily," would imply that every day, exactly 24 students were in class. Because the title says "Average Daily Attendance," we assume the reader knows that the statistics are monthly averages instead.

Absent is the opposite of attend.

I've changed where "on average" appears in the sentence to where we would speak it.